(lol! Waaaaay too shortREADERReport 2004-03-27 23:59:18good but way too short«1» make them longer. 5 comments«1»READERReport 2006-07-11 12:23:04it was ok but the last long paragraph it was confusing and the story was to short not that it matters any ways cause ive read better ones but i now know why anonymous is my favorete righter and its cause he goes into great detail and that rocksREADERReport 2005-11-21 07:44:53this is the third story of yours i have read. 5 comments«1»READERReport 2006-07-11 12:23:04it was ok but the last long paragraph it was confusing and the story was to short not that it matters any ways cause ive read better ones but i now know why anonymous is my favorete righter and its cause he goes into great detail and that rocksREADERReport 2005-11-21 07:44:53this is the third story of yours i have read.
