3 comments«1»animal99Report 2013-11-30 15:04:15I had to log in to write this:
I really enjoyed your story. There were a few things wrong with the grammar/ writing… Good story.. The only bad thing I found that should be addressed is that you should proof-read it a few times before publishing it. The only bad thing I found that should be addressed is that you should proof-read it a few times before publishing it. There were a few things wrong with the grammar/ writing… but I really enjoyed your story, and your ideas. 3 comments«1»animal99Report 2013-11-30 15:04:15I had to log in to write this:
I really enjoyed your story. There were a few things wrong with the grammar/ writing… 3 comments«1»animal99Report 2013-11-30 15:04:15I had to log in to write this:
I really enjoyed your story. but I really enjoyed your story, and your ideas.