59 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-15 22:40:51good story but needs more storylineanonymous readerReport 2012-06-27 03:03:06hmmmmmmmm too bad you didn’t get to fuck her more…….. 59 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-15 22:40:51good story but needs more storylineanonymous readerReport 2012-06-27 03:03:06hmmmmmmmm too bad you didn’t get to fuck her more…….. lol Great Story though.Anonymous readerReport 2008-11-28 21:24:44Decent story
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Not a half bad job with describing the sex. lol Great Story though.Anonymous readerReport 2008-11-28 21:24:44Decent story
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Not a half bad job with describing the sex. the experience would have done you good LOLAnonymous readerReport 2008-12-19 10:39:59Good story.OrtsmaReport 2008-12-05 01:15:07″Never saw her again…”? Con’s:
You need more dialoge during the sex because all you mainly did was describe it, your next story needs to have more dialoge during sex.«12345» Con’s:
You need more dialoge during the sex because all you mainly did was describe it, your next story needs to have more dialoge during sex.«12345» the experience would have done you good LOLAnonymous readerReport 2008-12-19 10:39:59Good story.OrtsmaReport 2008-12-05 01:15:07″Never saw her again…”? 59 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-15 22:40:51good story but needs more storylineanonymous readerReport 2012-06-27 03:03:06hmmmmmmmm too bad you didn’t get to fuck her more……..
