Hereing??? 8/10READERReport 2007-06-02 07:06:26Hereing the door open???? Hereing??? 1/10«12» 1/10«12» Hereing??? If edited for grammar and such would be better but otherwise don’t dange and good luck on any future story you might write. 1/10«12» 1/10«12» 8/10READERReport 2007-06-02 07:06:26Hereing the door open???? 1/10«12» hey, dumb-ass, it’s “hearing.” You couldn’t write a grocery list, you boring individual. 8/10READERReport 2007-06-02 07:06:26Hereing the door open???? hey, dumb-ass, it’s “hearing.” You couldn’t write a grocery list, you boring individual. 8/10READERReport 2007-06-02 07:06:26Hereing the door open???? 1/10«12» If edited for grammar and such would be better but otherwise don’t dange and good luck on any future story you might write. Hereing??? 6 comments«12»READERReport 2008-04-11 00:34:54Typos and grammar are overrated, I loved this story, I could barely get thru it all!READERReport 2007-06-16 21:07:54great story lol 14 and no sex at allREADERReport 2007-06-16 21:07:54great story lol 14 and no sex at allREADERReport 2007-06-16 20:01:48Great story, a few typo’s here and there (but who doesn’t make mistakes). 1/10«12» 1/10«12» 6 comments«12»READERReport 2008-04-11 00:34:54Typos and grammar are overrated, I loved this story, I could barely get thru it all!READERReport 2007-06-16 21:07:54great story lol 14 and no
