Traditional Indian Play-fighting Before The Holi Festival

Keep going.«1» Nice start, will wait for the next chapter, hope that it is a bit longer?hotjohn4321Report 2013-08-15 22:16:16good start great story idea.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-15 12:38:31This is very good start and will be a big hit if the rest is just as good.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-15 12:37:41Very nicely done. Keep going.«1» I have never heard a girls name being spencer though. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-11 07:23:16You just have to try to IGNORE the trolls on here, they have no life!! Nice start, will wait for the next chapter, hope that it is a bit longer?hotjohn4321Report 2013-08-15 22:16:16good start great story idea.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-15 12:38:31This is very good start and will be a big hit if the rest is just as good.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-15 12:37:41Very nicely done. I have never heard a girls name being spencer though. Nice start, will wait for the next chapter, hope that it is a bit longer?hotjohn4321Report 2013-08-15 22:16:16good start great story idea.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-15 12:38:31This is very good start and will be a big hit if the rest is just as good.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-15 12:37:41Very nicely done.