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it was almost painful to read. Do you know how much those things cost? This has promise, but your style needs a *lot* of work. This has promise, but your style needs a *lot* of work. Please learn how to use commas. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-12-19 22:50:00totally unrealistic its just to fake guess what im only 10 lolREADERReport 2006-03-28 18:38:28ok storyREADERReport 2006-03-28 18:37:08good story but needs more relistismREADERReport 2006-03-05 07:13:56This may be your first time writing a porn story, but it looks like it was your first time writing anything ever. You really need to write more about the characters, not just their clothes. =Dreamer=READERReport 2006-03-04 23:38:38complete crap«12» =Dreamer=READERReport 2006-03-04 23:38:38complete crap«12» Details are good, but they have to be the right details. it was almost painful to read.