You have interesting, lovely dark-sided ideas, and are a good writer, but I feel you may need to spend a little more time fleshing them out into words. You have interesting, lovely dark-sided ideas, and are a good writer, but I feel you may need to spend a little more time fleshing them out into words. I look forward to reading more.andersvegReport 2013-05-23 12:08:56don’t mind the negative comments. I get them all the time. Well its sickening to me I have to much respect for life and to kill let alone defile the body makes me so angry.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 15:32:31Another good story, but again it suffers from a lack of detail and feels rushed. Well its sickening to me I have to much respect for life and to kill let alone defile the body makes me so angry.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 15:32:31Another good story, but again it suffers from a lack of detail and feels rushed. Well its sickening to me I have to much respect for life and to kill let alone defile the body makes me so angry.anonymous
