The idea was awesome, but the terrible grammar and structure killed the turnon. I like the idea though.«123» I like the idea though.«123» Sooo many fragments. 14 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-25 20:57:48UuZ9Gs Very neat article.Thanks Again. Sooo many fragments. The idea was awesome, but the terrible grammar and structure killed the turnon. I like the idea though.«123» It is interesting to know more details..!!anonymous readerReport 2011-07-22 22:08:26Very hard to follow.anonymous readerReport 2010-08-31 16:35:35Yes, the lack of transition… I like the idea though.«123» The idea was awesome, but the terrible grammar and structure killed the turnon. Sooo many fragments. I like the idea though.«123» Awesome.anonymous readerReport 2012-02-11 20:53:36hTY5Bz Develop the topic further! “Wait… It is interesting to know more details..!!anonymous readerReport 2011-07-22 22:08:26Very hard to follow.anonymous readerReport 2010-08-31 16:35:35Yes, the lack of transition… 14 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-25 20:57:48UuZ9Gs Very neat article.Thanks Again. 14 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-25 20:57:48UuZ9Gs Very neat article.Thanks Again. It is interesting to know more details..!!anonymous readerReport 2011-07-22 22:08:26Very hard to follow.anonymous readerReport 2010-08-31 16:35:35Yes, the lack of transition… Sooo many fragments.
