that was awesome. 47 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2011-03-31 12:09:41Fantastic story and writing! you should keep writing. keep writing woth these two;)Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-15 23:36:13I honesty liked your story it seemed so real i am a female and by the end of this story i was soaking wet waiting for my boyfriend to get home. keep writing woth these two;)Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-15 23:36:13I honesty liked your story it seemed so real i am a female and by the end of this story i was soaking wet waiting for my boyfriend to get home. You should make this a series.Anonymous readerReport 2009-02-05 08:04:04absolutely amazingAnonymous readerReport 2008-05-17 00:22:25Please write more with these two guys. It was great.«12345» great descriptions, storyline, you know the works and all. It was great.«12345» you should keep writing. You should make this a series.Anonymous readerReport 2009-02-05 08:04:04absolutely amazingAnonymous readerReport 2008-05-17 00:22:25Please write more with these two guys. 47 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2011-03-31 12:09:41Fantastic story and writing!
