but very,very short… but very,very short… but very,very short… xanonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 01:25:50I liked it… Read some of the good ones here, develop more character and sex doesn’t just happen that quick, especially for kids that young.«1» 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-20 23:13:15good story. xanonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 01:25:50I liked it… but very,very short… looking forward to reading more from you lolanonymous readerReport 2012-11-02 20:38:57Well you definitely to work on your stories more. Read some of the good ones here, develop more character and sex doesn’t just happen that quick, especially for kids that young.«1» please make it long….Princess_jasmineReport 2013-04-01 13:56:29good story but needs more build up, storyline and character. looking forward to reading more from you lolanonymous readerReport 2012-11-02 20:38:57Well you definitely to work on your stories more. 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-20 23:13:15good story. looking forward to reading more from you lolanonymous readerReport 2012-11-02 20:38:57Well you definitely to work on your stories more.
