But where’s the suspence? I give it a 6/10anonymous readerReport 2011-11-22 23:37:04This is great, I want more«1» I give it a 6/10anonymous readerReport 2011-11-22 23:37:04This is great, I want more«1» But where’s the suspence? But where’s the suspence? But where’s the suspence? I give it a 6/10anonymous readerReport 2011-11-22 23:37:04This is great, I want more«1» 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-03-20 19:10:29You’re a great writer, keep it up!anonymous readerReport 2012-03-15 20:14:13instant negative 50 for no paragraphsanonymous readerReport 2011-12-29 04:59:00u should start the story by telling the first time both of u did it..anonymous readerReport 2011-12-06 03:07:48Its all right. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-03-20 19:10:29You’re a great writer, keep it up!anonymous readerReport 2012-03-15 20:14:13instant negative 50 for no paragraphsanonymous readerReport 2011-12-29 04:59:00u should start the story by telling the first time both of u did it..anonymous readerReport 2011-12-06 03:07:48Its all right. But where’s the suspence? 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-03-20 19:10:29You’re a great writer, keep it up!anonymous readerReport 2012-03-15 20:14:13instant negative 50 for no paragraphsanonymous readerReport 2011-12-29 04:59:00u should start the story by telling the first time both of u did it..anonymous readerReport 2011-12-06 03:07:48Its all right. I give it a 6/10anonymous readerReport 2011-11-22 23:37:04This is great, I
