Good luck
– Marcie the commenteranonymous readerReport 2013-08-18 22:26:02Clean up the slop, don’t post until you’ve proofread and formatted your work show some pride for criminy sakes.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-18 22:16:48You need to proof your work (maybe a few times) before posting, but otherwise an enjoyable story.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-18 16:05:24Couple of time sex thing«123» It was to short and u started off too strong. Good luck
– Marcie the commenteranonymous readerReport 2013-08-18 22:26:02Clean up the slop, don’t post until you’ve proofread and formatted your work show some pride for criminy sakes.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-18 22:16:48You need to proof your work (maybe a few times) before posting, but otherwise an enjoyable story.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-18 16:05:24Couple of time sex thing«123» Now thats a good story. Good luck
– Marcie the commenteranonymous readerReport 2013-08-18 22:26:02Clean up the slop, don’t post until you’ve proofread and formatted your work show some pride for criminy sakes.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-18 22:16:48You need to proof your work (maybe a few times) before posting, but otherwise an enjoyable story.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-18 16:05:24Couple of time sex thing«123»
