It captain not caption and the spelling mistakes make it hard to readDKoontzReport 2011-10-10 11:27:58i like where this story is headed, but please run it thru spell and grammar checks, and divide up that giant paragraph.«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-22 15:49:24Story is good so far but plz atleast spellcheck good example: the caption of the football team. 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-22 15:49:24Story is good so far but plz atleast spellcheck good example: the caption of the football team. It captain not caption and the spelling mistakes make it hard to readDKoontzReport 2011-10-10 11:27:58i like where this story is headed, but please run it thru spell and grammar checks, and divide up that giant paragraph.«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-22 15:49:24Story is good so far but plz atleast spellcheck good example: the caption of the football team. It captain not caption and the spelling mistakes make it hard to readDKoontzReport 2011-10-10 11:27:58i like where this story is headed, but please run it thru spell and grammar checks, and divide up that giant paragraph.«1»
