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Examples: then instead of than (they actually have different meanings); “grab my hand” instead of “grabbed my hand”; “pushes me gentle back” should be “pushes me gently back”. The story plot is interesting, but all the misspellings and wrong use of words was so distracting that I didn’t bother to finish the story. You could also try to imagine this is someone’s story that you’re reading. You could also try to imagine this is someone’s story that you’re reading. However, I loved the theme and the characters. Writing is like everything else, practice makes perfect and if you work at it you can acheive greatness.«12» Good Luck. How does it sound to you? Also, after uploading it’s a good idea to edit again–to put back the spacing that was lost in the upload. Keep it coming, you’ll get better as you go on. It makes the story much easier and enjoyable to read.