I’m not too fond of the ending myself, I feel I could have written it better. It’s nice to know that you though my story was good though.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-19 19:43:33Such a good story ruined by such a fucked up endinganonymous readerReport 2011-11-01 12:33:44Certainly an… I’m not too fond of the ending myself, I feel I could have written it better. I’m not too fond of the ending myself, I feel I could have written it better. Unexpected ending.«1» Which is why she essentially turned into a deep one. Which is why she essentially turned into a deep one. It’s nice to know that you though my story was good though.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-19 19:43:33Such a good story ruined by such a fucked up endinganonymous readerReport 2011-11-01 12:33:44Certainly an… 4 comments«1»JamesCorborayReport 2011-11-23 00:17:43Well, when I wrote it it was on a whim at 4 am nearing Halloween and I wanted to write something scary, but more Lovecraftian scary.
