dw«12» 5/10.READERReport 2006-08-13 08:14:50yep, plot is good rendition needs polishing,perhaps you might like to get someone to edit your next one to make the story easier to read, give you 9 for effort.READERReport 2006-07-18 15:46:17I think your introductory story is kind of “Good” to be honest with you; aside from a few grammatical flaws it is “Good”. dw«12» 5/10.READERReport 2006-08-13 08:14:50yep, plot is good rendition needs polishing,perhaps you might like to get someone to edit your next one to make the story easier to read, give you 9 for effort.READERReport 2006-07-18 15:46:17I think your introductory story is kind of “Good” to be honest with you; aside from a few grammatical flaws it is “Good”. 5/10.READERReport 2006-08-13 08:14:50yep, plot is good rendition needs polishing,perhaps you might like to get someone to edit your next one to make the story easier to read, give you 9 for effort.READERReport 2006-07-18 15:46:17I think your introductory story is kind of “Good” to be honest with you; aside from a few grammatical flaws it is “Good”.
