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As he was brushing his teeth his mum called him down to catch the bus. “Everyone stay calm and quite! They where all staring at them. As Jack looked deep into the six pairs of eyes he realised something. A few of them where openly hyperventilating and one was rocking under a desk. He was usually arrogant and took pleasure from putting others down. Within those dark, dead eyes he saw an overwhelming urge to eat and consume everything that moved. “Did you see him? As Jack wearily climbed out of bed to get dressed for school, he reflected on the Summer holiday that had seemed to fly past and realised, that once again he had done nothing worth mentioning.
