That is a difficult thing to do with this crowd. Just don’t rush it. It has a slow natural buildup, which is rare for stories on here.Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-12 04:58:58love the stories keep them commingAnonymous readerReport 2014-02-12 04:58:56love the stories keep them comminganonymous readerReport 2013-06-04 20:26:20Great start to what should turn out to be an excellent story. Part 1 of this story is good. You are building this up slow and steady, yet fast enough to keep most enticed. It has a slow natural buildup, which is rare for stories on here.Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-12 04:58:58love the stories keep them commingAnonymous readerReport 2014-02-12 04:58:56love the stories keep them comminganonymous readerReport 2013-06-04 20:26:20Great start to what should turn out to be an excellent story. It has a slow natural buildup, which is rare for stories on here.Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-12 04:58:58love the stories keep them commingAnonymous readerReport 2014-02-12 04:58:56love the stories keep them comminganonymous readerReport 2013-06-04 20:26:20Great start to what should turn out to be an excellent story.
