I sympathize with the girl totally. The situation is intense, but the story doesn’t obsess over one point of view. This submission dominates, Traci.READERReport 2005-05-07 19:19:49love this story, it made me cum.«12» I really liked it. I sympathize with the girl totally. I’m sure she must have had emotions about it after while alone in her room…READERReport 2006-06-12 21:57:19reading them in order like this series…READERReport 2006-03-09 23:45:08not a bad read. It’s boiled down, and it has an immedeate style. I really liked it. xoxoxox Tx again, vanessaREADERReport 2006-01-07 13:27:19This is real psychological storytelling. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-28 20:27:27Good story but poor grammar does subtract from the flow in reading… Damn she lost her innocents but you gave no details… I’m sure she must have had emotions about it after while alone in her room…READERReport 2006-06-12 21:57:19reading them in order like this series…READERReport 2006-03-09 23:45:08not a bad read.
