I just didn’t get sucked in. Would have been awesome if the paladins got their asses kicked at the end. It had good detail, and a back story, and whatnot. Good job over all!«1» 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. It had good detail, and a back story, and whatnot. This story lacked something, and I can’t put my finger on it. But I did finish it. 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. Good job over all!«1» The sex part could have been longer, but then again, I tend to make mine a little short as well. The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site. I just didn’t get sucked in. The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site. The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site. Good job over all!«1» Good job over all!«1» The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site.
