Before the first sentence the story had potential.. 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-10-29 00:35:24PLEASE…..STOP…..WRITING!!!!!!! 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-10-29 00:35:24PLEASE…..STOP…..WRITING!!!!!!! Please don’t continue«12» Take spelling!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 01:51:14This was fvckin stupid! 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-10-29 00:35:24PLEASE…..STOP…..WRITING!!!!!!! Take spelling!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 01:51:14This was fvckin stupid! Please don’t continue«12» Before the first sentence the story had potential.. Give it up….u DONT write well, there was NOTHING sexy or hot abt this story…just….stop writing….OR I if u insist on continuing – LEARN HOW TO WRITE BETTER & USE FUCKING SPELL/GRAMMAR CHECK!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-04 17:46:51Leave it; he’ll understand??! Please don’t continue«12» Wow, if your dad is fine with you having sex with Luke while you’re 14, then that’s incredibly wrong.Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-30 01:26:34Ok.. 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-10-29 00:35:24PLEASE…..STOP…..WRITING!!!!!!! How the hell did u even GET an account – thru ur daddy? Wow, if your dad is fine with you having sex with Luke while you’re 14, then that’s incredibly wrong.Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-30 01:26:34Ok.. 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-10-29 00:35:24PLEASE…..STOP…..WRITING!!!!!!! You write like a half retarded twelve year old.. Please don’t continue«12» Give it up….u DONT write well, there was NOTHING sexy or hot abt
