********************this is one of my first original edits, the story is slightly different but I can’t put the EXACT story on here and then publish it later, so a few minor changes were made*****************
Jack would often walk up and down the beach, mostly keeping to himself but sometimes he would engage in conversation with passersby or the lifeguard sitting perched on their stand. ————————-(next excerpt is not in line with above, so it may not flow as well————–
The smells at the beach were grand to say the least. Aw, and it was SO close to the end! Wow!! This isn’t a forum, go to forums to rant. Instead of ranting in a negative way, if you have a better idea for a (similar or compatible story) worthy of me writing it, let me know.
Actors:
Zoey Andrews
