I also find you have excellent knowledge of the sex act. It’s much more difficult when describing group sex activity. COACHanonymous readerReport 2013-10-28 01:54:27Can’t wait to find out what happens at the studio. If you have no help in that area, it will sometimes help if you let your work rest between the draft and editing stage. It’s much more difficult when describing group sex activity. Can’t wait to read what happens at the studio. Keep up the good work. If you want to improve from this point, I would say to improve your editing. Your mistakes are minimal. Your mistakes are minimal. Taking the brother and sister act in front of a camera. What a great Christmas present that would be.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-27 17:43:10need it come on, love it«1» That may help you edit what is actually on the page, rather than what is in your memory. Keep up the good work. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2015-12-08 17:29:41As a retired professional writer, I find you an excellent craftsman of the word.
