I’m 20 but ive always wanted to suck a younger guys cockanonymous readerReport 2011-12-20 22:16:24Twin boys um my dreams 2 4 th price of 1anonymous readerReport 2011-02-01 15:31:07wow, bad comments…… Detail is good, but when you go on about stuff that you’ve already made clear it distracts from the story. Hope this helps.«12345» Detail is good, but when you go on about stuff that you’ve already made clear it distracts from the story. Detail is good, but when you go on about stuff that you’ve already made clear it distracts from the story. Detail is good, but when you go on about stuff that you’ve already made clear it distracts from the story. Hope this helps.«12345» thats the only way to work on ur stories!archrevenantReport 2011-01-27 02:43:13Grammar made me stop reading, i skimmed the rest but spelling is important if you want to engage the reader. Like, ““So I guess it’s a turn on to see yourself naked?” talking about Kale seeing him (his twin brother).
