As others have said, spelling, grammar, and format are important, but you have an interesting storyline going that you can continue to work with. cut your fucking fingers off that way you are unable to do so even if you’re tempted to do so in the future. Honestly this ranks in the top five if the worst stories I have ever seen posted on the web anywhere!!! 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-24 02:57:12It’s a good first try. PLEASE either learn english or wait till you finish middle school before you even attempt writing again. Between the constant use of wrong words everywhere and the absolutely screwed up structering of phrases. Between the constant use of wrong words everywhere and the absolutely screwed up structering of phrases. Very fast. Very fast. You’ve given me a headache with your utter stupidity you ridiculous cretin!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 14:35:15Ok a comment. Do everyone a favor, quit posting ignorant shit like this and leave writing to those who have at least a basic understanding of the English language.
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