He is married to a woman old enough to have an 18 yo daughter, but he slacks around the house like a 20 yo stoner. For all the build up, the sex scene(s?) was kind of anticlimactic. but u gotta improve … He is married to a woman old enough to have an 18 yo daughter, but he slacks around the house like a 20 yo stoner. This probably arises from the author being 19 but trying to write about an older married couple, write what you know (or at east what you can bullshit convincingly) There was very little description of the charecters except to throw a few numbers and letters at us. With a bit of polishing it could pass as reasonably good.«12» 7 comments«12»READERReport 2005-11-11 05:38:23agrree with miker ….. This probably arises from the author being 19 but trying to write about an older married couple, write what you know (or at east what you can bullshit convincingly) There was very little description of the charecters except to throw a few numbers and letters at
