Other than that, the story was great but you could have made each sex scene as the end of a chapter.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-04 11:25:05it is illegal to put ads in your story that is spam you can and should be arrested for that delete the spam now«1234» 19 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 16:51:17ruined by posting a stolen story and putting an ad in the middle of itanonymous readerReport 2013-03-25 08:30:57you are some kinky fucker but wow am i turnd onanonymous readerReport 2012-08-23 13:50:48DELETE THE STOLEN STORY BEFORE YOU ARE ARRESTED FOR FELONY PLAGERISM.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-22 18:33:26This would have been perfect, exept for the fucking ad interupting the action. 19 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 16:51:17ruined by posting a stolen story and putting an ad in the middle of itanonymous readerReport 2013-03-25 08:30:57you are some kinky fucker but wow am i turnd onanonymous readerReport 2012-08-23 13:50:48DELETE THE STOLEN STORY BEFORE YOU ARE ARRESTED FOR FELONY PLAGERISM.anonymous readerReport 2011-08-22 18:33:26This would have been perfect, exept for the fucking ad interupting the action. It’s like you kicked the story in the balls. 19 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 16:51:17ruined by posting a stolen story and
