Good Story!anonymous readerReport 2013-05-24 11:31:55This is an excellent story you had a well developed plot and the he characters harm personality and I would love to read more it had a hot ending and I am now curious as to how things will progress between Killian and aidonanonymous readerReport 2013-05-23 23:27:40I like it. Yes the rules are a bonus…nicely done.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-23 22:49:44It was in paragraphs. Yes the rules are a bonus…nicely done.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-23 22:49:44It was in paragraphs. Great plot and very hot at the end. when I read it, it was in paragraphs, and it still is. Great plot and very hot at the end. -first commenter-«12» -first commenter-«12» Great plot and very hot at the end. Yes the rules are a bonus…nicely done.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-23 22:49:44It was in paragraphs. 7 comments«12»SilverSwanReport 2020-01-05 03:36:22Too hard to even bother with in current format.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-24 16:58:12This was really sexy and I loved how it made sense and it wasn’t sloppy.
