Beat it.«123» I just smiled and laughed, but never had the heart to break it to the snobby punk that I had already claimed what he was after!Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-27 22:29:16Not bad but not as good as it couldve been. Who ARE these people? 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-09 15:01:06Amazing workAnonymous readerReport 2009-09-13 06:48:32My older sister (3 years older) talked me into sexual play with her (heh..wasn’t too difficult for her) just after I went through puberty. He loved to brag to me about the fact that he was with my sister and that he’d had his hand on her tits or some silly shit. Beat it.«123» Wasn’t unreadable or anything, but dialogue was a bit rough towards the beginning. Sheesh. “Incest is a must!” cracked me up for the fact he is blasting someone for writing a story about incest on a site that hosts Snuff, Rape, and Cannibalism. Other than that, not bad.Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-26 09:36:15Needs some structure work (spelling, grammar, etc) but decent story. Other than Beth having brown hair, I don’t remember ANY details about what they look
