good start to this one. Other than that I’m working on putting these out one every week if possible.«1234» just write the storyanonymous readerReport 2013-09-02 02:53:59Holy shit! The way you present her makes it seem like it could be a real person who has gone mad!!! Glad to see the comments from Derek and the hostility with the dad, but also glad to see it get settled. 19 comments«1234»Norton5Report 2013-11-20 17:06:35I found it interesting how the protagonist reacted to the big guy being bullied by those jocks, particularly his concern over the notice on the school site. A lot of detail in this story. Still don’t like the ‘forgiving attitude’ with Loretta, but it appears you’ve turned the story back around and have it heading in the right direction again. Still don’t like the ‘forgiving attitude’ with Loretta, but it appears you’ve turned the story back around and have it heading in the right direction again. good start to this one. Damn, I love it it’s so believable!! Good arguments between characters.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-18 03:56:43سكسي عراقيanonymous readerReport 2013-09-02 10:18:51looks like Derek
