Don’t get discouraged.«1234» There are minimal grammatical errors. The story is too short, probably because details and descriptions are lacking in quantity and volume! The story is too short, probably because details and descriptions are lacking in quantity and volume! There are minimal grammatical errors. The story is too short, probably because details and descriptions are lacking in quantity and volume! Just because it is erotica doesn’t mean you can just put words together and be done. So much information is missing that even the reader’s imagination can’t overcome!Anonymous readerReport 2014-09-22 02:38:58YER STORIES ARE SHIT JUST SO YOU KNOW MATEAnonymous readerReport 2014-06-19 04:08:59Ok that’s throwed off but a touching storyanonymous readerReport 2013-10-10 14:23:16D story is Good as well I love itjdm320Report 2013-10-01 11:29:09Story was not bad. Why did she get pregnant the first time with her eight year old daughter Sarina Marie by someone else?? The writing format, structure and construction are lacking in many areas. So much information is missing that even the reader’s imagination can’t overcome!Anonymous readerReport 2014-09-22 02:38:58YER STORIES ARE SHIT JUST SO YOU KNOW MATEAnonymous readerReport 2014-06-19 04:08:59Ok that’s
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