17 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2011-12-28 17:05:02Come on your still a virgin aint ya, only virgins are that shit at writing erotic stories, have sex and try again, P.S your obviously a girl, no guy can come more than 4 times in an hour, get a lifepowerReport 2008-11-28 10:33:38it wasnt a bad story he juss has to spell check next timeREADERReport 2008-02-24 22:51:47WOW, just fucking terribleREADERReport 2007-06-10 01:42:58JESUS FUCKING BALLS DO US A FAVOR STOP WRIGHTING AND KILL YOURSELF!! 17 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2011-12-28 17:05:02Come on your still a virgin aint ya, only virgins are that shit at writing erotic stories, have sex and try again, P.S your obviously a girl, no guy can come more than 4 times in an hour, get a lifepowerReport 2008-11-28 10:33:38it wasnt a bad story he juss has to spell check next timeREADERReport 2008-02-24 22:51:47WOW, just fucking terribleREADERReport 2007-06-10 01:42:58JESUS FUCKING BALLS DO US A FAVOR STOP WRIGHTING AND KILL YOURSELF!!
