You probably should write a Pt2 to ” Laurie” first though as it was your best effort and could easy have some followups. See yaREADERReport 2005-02-27 16:18:28What is the meaning of all of this. Invisible indeed!«12» It’s not a bad effort and start though. You probably should write a Pt2 to ” Laurie” first though as it was your best effort and could easy have some followups. All his stories are characterized by very graphic, vivid, realistic emotions-feelings. 9 comments«12»READERReport 2008-02-17 20:44:28A few errors, and you really should have continued it, and you should write non-erotic in the tag section next time with a story like this.READERReport 2006-05-10 13:25:25Another excellent story by this author. You probably should write a Pt2 to ” Laurie” first though as it was your best effort and could easy have some followups. I adimt the attention getter of the story but where did it lead? Invisible indeed!«12» 9 comments«12»READERReport 2008-02-17 20:44:28A few errors, and you really should have continued it, and you should write non-erotic in the tag section next time with a story like this.READERReport 2006-05-10
