No one likes to read a wall of words. Your first two stories were ok, but you seemed to change your paragraph phasing to make all your stories a little more readable. Awesome.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-29 13:45:00You have obviously watched the shows, your stories are based on, to get the dialogue of all the characters. Overall good job.«12» No one likes to read a wall of words. Awesome.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-29 13:45:00You have obviously watched the shows, your stories are based on, to get the dialogue of all the characters. Awesome.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-29 13:45:00You have obviously watched the shows, your stories are based on, to get the dialogue of all the characters. Overall good job.«12» Awesome.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-29 13:45:00You have obviously watched the shows, your stories are based on, to get the dialogue of all the characters. No one likes to read a wall of words. No one likes to read a wall of words. Awesome.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-29 13:45:00You have obviously watched the shows, your stories are based on, to get the dialogue of all the characters.
