Keep at it and you can only improve. 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-03-24 22:26:10I was curious as to what necrophilia was. I get them all the time. Make the bitch suffer.«12» keep writing!andersvegReport 2013-05-23 12:07:29drown her properly. I look forward to reading more.andersvegReport 2013-05-23 12:08:56don’t mind the negative comments. You have interesting, lovely dark-sided ideas, and are a good writer, but I feel you may need to spend a little more time fleshing them out into words. Make the bitch suffer.«12» Make the bitch suffer.«12» keep writing!andersvegReport 2013-05-23 12:07:29drown her properly. I look forward to reading more.andersvegReport 2013-05-23 12:08:56don’t mind the negative comments. I get them all the time. keep writing!andersvegReport 2013-05-23 12:07:29drown her properly. I look forward to reading more.andersvegReport 2013-05-23 12:08:56don’t mind the negative comments. I look forward to reading more.andersvegReport 2013-05-23 12:08:56don’t mind the negative comments. Well its sickening to me I have to much respect for life and to kill let alone defile the body makes me so angry.anonymous readerReport 2013-05-31 15:32:31Another good story, but again it suffers from a lack of detail and feels rushed.
