…And this is one of the better ones.READERReport 2004-02-27 12:52:19Your story plot was amusing, however, you need to pay more attention to structure. 2 comments«1»READERReport 2004-05-08 16:49:00i just thought you should know, I love your stories. I’ll look for it.«1» 2 comments«1»READERReport 2004-05-08 16:49:00i just thought you should know, I love your stories. It’s hard to enjoy the “flow” unless the story is well told. It’s hard to enjoy the “flow” unless the story is well told. I’m assuming that the sequel will include a three-way with all of the characters. I liked it. 2 comments«1»READERReport 2004-05-08 16:49:00i just thought you should know, I love your stories. It’s hard to enjoy the “flow” unless the story is well told. I’m assuming that the sequel will include a three-way with all of the characters.
