Other than that, great story.READERReport 2004-05-05 00:59:35this is a cool siteREADERReport 2004-03-30 00:39:03good story, i liked it a lot.READERReport 2004-03-19 02:02:24lol that was very good«1» And, you should really seperate the paragraphs. And, you should really seperate the paragraphs. And, you should really seperate the paragraphs. And, you should really seperate the paragraphs. 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-25 12:27:33There are a couple mistakes I saw, but that’s okay. Other than that, great story.READERReport 2004-05-05 00:59:35this is a cool siteREADERReport 2004-03-30 00:39:03good story, i liked it a lot.READERReport 2004-03-19 02:02:24lol that was very good«1» 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-25 12:27:33There are a couple mistakes I saw, but that’s okay. And, you should really seperate the paragraphs. Other than that, great story.READERReport 2004-05-05 00:59:35this is a cool siteREADERReport 2004-03-30 00:39:03good story, i liked it a lot.READERReport 2004-03-19 02:02:24lol that was very good«1» And, you should really seperate the paragraphs. Other than that, great story.READERReport 2004-05-05 00:59:35this is a cool siteREADERReport 2004-03-30 00:39:03good story, i liked it a lot.READERReport 2004-03-19 02:02:24lol that was very good«1»
