6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-06 23:06:57there’s no “reluctance”READERReport 2006-05-28 16:23:23patheticREADERReport 2005-06-03 16:31:00The god says that his grandmother could write porno better than this piece of shit. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-06 23:06:57there’s no “reluctance”READERReport 2006-05-28 16:23:23patheticREADERReport 2005-06-03 16:31:00The god says that his grandmother could write porno better than this piece of shit. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-06 23:06:57there’s no “reluctance”READERReport 2006-05-28 16:23:23patheticREADERReport 2005-06-03 16:31:00The god says that his grandmother could write porno better than this piece of shit. 150 % rewrite is needed.READERReport 2005-03-13 17:46:04REWRITE!!!! u need a better ending, better disciption, and better background sceneREADERReport 2004-12-27 12:45:46Really, well think it needs a 100% re-write. 150 % rewrite is needed.READERReport 2005-03-13 17:46:04REWRITE!!!! Bullshit«12» 150 % rewrite is needed.READERReport 2005-03-13 17:46:04REWRITE!!!! u need a better ending, better disciption, and better background sceneREADERReport 2004-12-27 12:45:46Really, well think it needs a 100% re-write. u need a better ending, better disciption, and better background sceneREADERReport 2004-12-27 12:45:46Really, well think it needs a 100% re-write.
