I have posted the next part and once they post it I think I fixed it. I have posted the next part and once they post it I think I fixed it. If the story happens to you leave it there, If you’re an observer, stay with it. the changing tenses, and viewpoint. the changing tenses, and viewpoint. the changing tenses, and viewpoint. the changing tenses, and viewpoint. RREADERReport 2005-05-06 13:36:56that story was so hard 2 finish
try again
3/10«123» RREADERReport 2005-05-06 13:36:56that story was so hard 2 finish
try again
3/10«123» Thanks for all the advice and be well.READERReport 2005-05-06 13:39:22Not a bad story idea, that said, it needs work esp. I have posted the next part and once they post it I think I fixed it. I thought you did a great job keep up the good work!
