Your shower scene was way too short too. Then your parents were not gone even an hour and you still had a few days to go. It was nice and refreshing, but way to short. Hmmm!READERReport 2008-01-28 18:26:50Not bad for a young girl. 5 comments«1»WetOneReport 2008-04-26 10:29:08one word SUCKED! and not in a good way. I felt that it needed more. Hmmm!READERReport 2008-01-28 18:26:50Not bad for a young girl. Tell you what…write part two and I’ll forgive you.«1» Then your parents were not gone even an hour and you still had a few days to go. Hmmm!READERReport 2008-01-28 18:26:50Not bad for a young girl. Hmmm!READERReport 2008-01-28 18:26:50Not bad for a young girl. I felt that it needed more. I felt that it needed more. ;)READERReport 2008-01-30 21:02:48Why so short what about the other gurlREADERReport 2008-01-29 16:38:41pretty good, a bit too shortREADERReport 2008-01-29 04:01:08Wow… Your shower scene was way too short too. and not in a good way.
