16 comments«1234»jack simpsonReport 2023-10-29 23:01:252nd time to read this. really needs to be editedanonymous readerReport 2011-07-30 20:33:23needs a total rewrite and a good editor the paragraphs just keep getting longer and longer. This isn’t “Anna Karenina” nor is our friend here pretending to be Tolstoy. C’è il suo fratellino che avrà il cazzo ancora mignon , ma crescerà intanto si fottono e godono, La vita è così breve.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-10 22:29:36pretty good, for a first draft. really needs to be editedanonymous readerReport 2011-07-30 20:33:23needs a total rewrite and a good editor the paragraphs just keep getting longer and longer. “Respect for the readers” you mean the bunch of dudes sitting naked at a computer and jacking off to stories bout Sister fucking?! è la sostanza che conta, Qui c’è una fica di 15 anni calda e vogliosa che viole cazzo e solo cazzo. Get the fuck outta here! Newsflash dick wad, nobody heres winning a Pulitzer!
