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In my opinion, that’s the main trick you should be looking to pull work to turn your first draft into a polished story. This can be tricky, as you don’t want to be constantly adding prosaic details like, “There was a chair on the deck”, but at the same time, if someone’s going to jump on a chair it’s helpful for the reader to know in advance that it’s there. A related problem is that the reader can’t hear your voice. With this in mind, I drafted a few points I thought it would be worth sharing on the thread, and that drafting process produced enough words that I thought it would be better just to publish them as an essay. To start with, take things a sentence at a time, then move on to looking at how sentences work with each other, and finally to do a paragraph-level
