I have started to re-read some stories again, getting more detail.Dudley DowrongReport 2018-07-18 09:24:48Agree with the 2 comments. Hopefully U have progressed beyond amatur. The closing was not what I expected but still good. I have started to re-read some stories again, getting more detail.Dudley DowrongReport 2018-07-18 09:24:48Agree with the 2 comments. 4 comments«1»Rex AllenReport 2024-04-26 04:18:53I loved the entire story. Good luck in future efforts,
Thank U for sharing Ur talent with us..OGEYReport 2010-09-01 09:48:24Great Stories, some spelling and Punctuation.. Maybe a little anti-climatic. Overall I enjoyed them very much!! Maybe a little anti-climatic. Good luck in future efforts,
Thank U for sharing Ur talent with us..OGEYReport 2010-09-01 09:48:24Great Stories, some spelling and Punctuation.. Hopefully U have progressed beyond amatur. Good luck in future efforts,
Thank U for sharing Ur talent with us..OGEYReport 2010-09-01 09:48:24Great Stories, some spelling and Punctuation.. yet from time to time review Ur earlier efforts for encouraging comments such as this. Good luck in future efforts,
Thank U for sharing Ur talent with us..OGEYReport 2010-09-01 09:48:24Great Stories, some spelling and Punctuation..
