Broke Twice Because Of A Busty, Curvy Woman

I admit I didn’t make it even a third of the way through this story. I’m not saying give up, but you really need a lot of work if your going to produce quality literature.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-02 20:05:20Mistakes yes ! Other than that, good job. Way too choppy and hard to read. You have numerous spelling and grammatical errors which should be obvious to you when you proof read your work. Not perfect but a very good read ! More please !«1234» 17 comments«1234»robsterthefoxReport 2012-12-03 00:56:53Thanks everyone for your support and I am currently working on the second part of the story and it is looking to be pretty good. More please !«1234» With that being said, you definitely need to proof read your work before submitting it, or else have someone do it for you. You have numerous spelling and grammatical errors which should be obvious to you when you proof read your work. I’am very sorry about the weird A’s but they were not there when I submitted the stories so can any members on this that