I didn’t see one comma. kind of funny that you make that comment in chapter 29. I didn’t see one comma. It makes it very hard to read. Sorry ya’ll…. I pretty seriously doubt that the world will end because of a misused word in a FREE story on an adult website. For instance; suit is clothing, and a suite is a set of rooms. Do yourself a favor and take an english course.«12345» If you can write a better story, prove it, until then, your opinion don’t really matter more than some armchair quarterback watching at home……BigMan7307
Loved the series, would have loved to seen it completed. I pretty seriously doubt that the world will end because of a misused word in a FREE story on an adult website. Unlike most of you, I’m proud to actually sign my reviews so you know where to be a hater at next. I didn’t take collegiate english, I happen to speak American, which is different in some aspects.
