There is a few spelling mistakes, but nothing major. ……………..xxxx«1» 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-04 17:24:20Seems like written froh a tun year old. ……………..xxxx«1» Maybe you should rewrite in and take your time.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-13 12:04:04very goodanonymous readerReport 2013-09-20 16:27:56I like it , but you should capitalize the beginning of sentences and proper names. so hot and dark! so hot and dark! No build um. Bin logical jumps, like parts Art missing. Maybe you should rewrite in and take your time.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-13 12:04:04very goodanonymous readerReport 2013-09-20 16:27:56I like it , but you should capitalize the beginning of sentences and proper names. 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-04 17:24:20Seems like written froh a tun year old. so hot and dark! ……………..xxxx«1» 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-04 17:24:20Seems like written froh a tun year old. Bin logical jumps, like parts Art missing. No build um. The final thing is Cho is a year ahead of Harry, so for her to be there it would need to be his 6th year or expand upon Cho falling apart and failing a year after C Cedric died. so hot and dark!
