43 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-05 18:19:37reads like a story that was stolen and they tried to change it to make it seem like it was theirs.Anonymous readerReport 2015-06-07 05:11:52That nigga dick size kept changingGhostrider939Report 2012-06-11 22:24:53Try to get the facts right and keep them that way. Changing names from one sentence to the next and then about every other paragraph confuses readers. These errors distract fr5om readab ility and enjoyment.Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-03 00:17:30this is rape not incest!«12345» 43 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-05 18:19:37reads like a story that was stolen and they tried to change it to make it seem like it was theirs.Anonymous readerReport 2015-06-07 05:11:52That nigga dick size kept changingGhostrider939Report 2012-06-11 22:24:53Try to get the facts right and keep them that way. Also, be consistent with the size figures. Changing names from one sentence to the next and then about every other paragraph confuses readers.
