Incredibly descriptive and fluid writing that simply kept me wanting to read more and more. Keep up the good work, you certainly have made a fan out of me.wickedkittenReport 2010-07-05 03:19:59I really don’t understand why anyone would not enjoy this story, if people are looking for a story, this is a story, if they are looking for a sex scene, there is plenty in there, and if they think actually reading a good story for the writing and the eroticism is hard, they shouldn’t complain for their own hindrances. Great work really, my stuff is no where near as good.Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-25 16:52:43Weird, overblown, and boring. Great work really, my stuff is no where near as good.Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-25 16:52:43Weird, overblown, and boring. Keep up the good work, you certainly have made a fan out of me.wickedkittenReport 2010-07-05 03:19:59I really don’t understand why anyone would not enjoy this story, if people are looking for a story, this is a story, if they are looking for a sex scene, there is plenty in there, and if they think actually reading a good
