Was not able to finish it.«1» What is up with that? I hope your future stories are betteral459Report 2013-01-18 15:20:01The plot is interesting but it was like reading a screenplay. I hope your future stories are betteral459Report 2013-01-18 15:20:01The plot is interesting but it was like reading a screenplay. What is up with that? I hope your future stories are betteral459Report 2013-01-18 15:20:01The plot is interesting but it was like reading a screenplay. MasterBaterReport 2013-01-18 19:54:14This really sucked and made no sense. I hope your future stories are betteral459Report 2013-01-18 15:20:01The plot is interesting but it was like reading a screenplay. I hope your future stories are betteral459Report 2013-01-18 15:20:01The plot is interesting but it was like reading a screenplay. I hope your future stories are betteral459Report 2013-01-18 15:20:01The plot is interesting but it was like reading a screenplay. MasterBaterReport 2013-01-18 19:54:14This really sucked and made no sense. Was not able to finish it.«1» To much narative and descriptive actions.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-17 10:15:38Very disjointed.
