Otherwise pretty good. That was a beautiful story, and it had just the right twist to it! Personally I don’t like incest so that made it all better. :)jubalee111Report 2008-09-20 06:15:44Male 57, I was totally enjoying your story. So, I went back to the start to read it all over. I had come about three-quarters of the way through it – and then I noticed the computer’s Norton security scan came on, and stayed on for about fourty-five minutes. After it had ‘settled down’, I tried reading from the place I was stopped. 3 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-01 04:35:56Work on your grammar a bit. Personally I don’t like incest so that made it all better. That was a beautiful story, and it had just the right twist to it! I like how you made sure it wasn’t the “actual” Aunt.
